Review of short script “Tom Tom and Goose”
First shot: Two shot medium shot of two people sitting on a log. The camera is directed at us from behind our backs.
Second shot: Two shot medium shot but this time the camera is in front of us pointing towards us from a sideway angle.
Third shot: Two shot long shot with the camera a distance in front of us showing our whole bodies sitting on the log talking.
Fourth shot: Two shot medium shot with the camera in front of us angled sideways at our faces. The shot is also a low angle shot.
Fifth shot: Medium shot high angle shot of us with the camera looking down at us but also rotating around us at the same time (pam shot?).
Sixth shot: Medium shot with a high camera angle with the camera pointed at our backs.
Seventh shot: Two Long shot with high camera angle looking down on us from the side.
Eighth shot: Extreme long shot two shot of us sitting on log. Camera then zooms in closer on the two people sitting on the tree.
We had to improvise with the location of our script allot because in the script we were meant to be driving through London and then we had to rob a bank and die from gun wounds from the police. So in the end we decided to have our location in the woods and just sit on a log and read out the script using cool camera techniques in the video shots we took. Me and Jack both played roles on the script and Charlie came into our group for the day because we were missing our other group member. Charlie was the camera man.
Because there were no gaps in the script where only one person was talking for a majority of time we decided that all our shots should be two shots so that the audience could see what was going on with both the characters at all time while they were making conversation with each other.
Because we changed the script to the two characters just sitting on a log talking the whole time we had to make up for that with the camera shot techniques, so we used some shots such as high and low angle shots, zoom in and out shots and panning shots which all worked really well with our script.
We had done an original film before this one but it was unfortunately filmed over by someone. I was not o bothered by this because the film we shot after looked a lot better. Things that I would have done to improve the video would be possibly more action or movement coming from the characters who were just sitting on the log because it did look rather dull and we could have used a lot more camera techniques if we had.
Shot List
Two shot
Medium shot
Long shot
Low angle shot
High angle shot
Extreme long shot
Zoom in shots
Zoom out shots
Panning shots